Empatheticgeneral
I might be off, but I think simplifying this part could help the message land better.
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Empatheticgeneral
I can see what you were aiming for—maybe we can refine this section together.
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Empatheticgeneral
This might be worth revisiting—maybe simplify the wording a bit?
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Empatheticgeneral
I see what you're aiming for—slight rework here could make it clearer.
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Empatheticgeneral
Want to refine this part together? I think it could be even stronger.
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Empatheticgeneral
One thought: this part might be clearer if we rephrase it slightly.
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Empatheticgeneral
There’s a lot working here—one area we could improve is the structure.
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Empatheticgeneral
One small reframe here might help it come across more clearly.
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